许多学生抱怨AEIS作文难,其中一个主要原因是他们写不出能让老师打出高分的好句子。那么怎样才能写出让老师赞不绝口的好句子呢呢?AEIS写作中如何使句型多样化?
A.把句子写具体
句子只做到“完整”是不能准确表达意思的,还要做到“具体”。怎样的句子才算是具体的呢?读读下面的句子,体会一下:
1. People use private cars.
2. People use private cars frequently.
分析:第二句写清了频率。
通过在句子主要成分的前面或后面,写清什么时候(时间)、在什么地方(地点)、怎么样(形式)、为什么(原因)等,就写清了事物特点,就把自己要准确表达的意思写出来了。
B.把句子写完整
句子一般由两部分组成,前半部分交代“谁”,后半部分交代“做什么”、“怎么样”或者“是什么”。
那么怎样的句子才算是完整的呢?读读下面的句子:
1. People use private cars. (谁,干什么)
2. Video games can be educational. (谁,是什么)
C.把句子写连贯
怎样才能做到把句子写连贯呢?
1.合理安排顺序,使句子连贯。
有顺序,这是使句子意思连贯的最基本的要求。这就要求同学在写句子时,一定不能东一句、西一句,想到哪儿就写到哪儿。要围绕既定的中心意思,按照一定的顺序,把相关的句子组织在一起,使句子前后连贯。
2. 学会运用his/her/they/it/this/that等代词,使句子连贯。
D.如何使句子多样化?
在写作的学习当中,最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短,通常要加些附属成分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语等。
为了提高写作水平和句型多样化,AEIS作文的高分句式整理必不可少!小编为大家整理了写作必备高分句型,大家在写作时可以替换着用。
1.So + 形容词+ be + 主词+ that + 从句(如此……以致于……)
例如:So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.
2.形容词+ as +主语+ be,主语+ 谓语(虽然……)
例如:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
3.The + 比较级+主语+谓语,the +比较级+主语+谓语(愈……愈……)
例如:The harder you work, the more progress you.
4.It is time + 主语+ 过去式(该是……的时候了)
例如:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
注意:此句型可以转化为简单句句型:It is time for sth./for sb to do….
例如:It is time for lunch.
5.spend as much time as he could doing sth.(花尽可能的时间做某事)
例如:He spent as much time as he could remembering new words.
6.Since + 主语+ 过去式,主语+ 现在完成式
例如:Since he went to senior high school,he has worked very hard.
7.An advantage of… is that + 句子(……的优点是……)
例如:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create (produce) any pollution.
8.It was not until recently that….(直到最近,……)
例如:It was not until recently that the problem was solved.
9.We will be successful as long as we…. (只要我们……,我们就会成功的)
例如:We will be successful as long as we insist on working hard.
10.The reason why + 从句is that + 从句(……的原因是……)
例如:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
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